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April 5th, 2007

Fic: Ritual Objects (NC-17) @ 05:30 pm

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From:infinimato
Date:April 9th, 2007 06:53 am (UTC)
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OMIGOD.

Teyla the Yenta. You gotta love it.

One nit
"[...] I swear I won't hurt you, Rodney, but I need you. I need inside you."

"need inside you"?!? Did you forget your "to be" or are you from Pixxburgh? :-P

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From:sgatlantislight
Date:April 9th, 2007 09:18 pm (UTC)
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In the midst of passion, people words out... ;)

The Author is Evil

Evil Textually Rendered?